Cherie Adan
Matt Thomas
Language Arts 9
January 22, 2008
Commando bear
My epic hero is Commando bear, who once was a normal panda bear who was laid back with not a care in the world. He was a son of a god and goddess, who were killed by a demon. He was one of six heirs for the throne. He was given a power of claws of death which could cut any substance and also he could speak and walk upright like a human. His mission, along with his three brothers and two sisters, was to seek and kill the demon who killed his parents, whoever did this first was the winner, and would claim the rightful position as a god.
One day when Commando bear was sitting watching his favorite soap opera on Animal World, he decided he needed to do what the character Pandima did and get even with the demon who killed his parents. So, he walked out of the bar he where he had been drinking bamboo shots, and onto the crowded trees of Woodland. He climbed for hours, trying to decide how he would find and kill the demon that had killed his godly parents when he was only a cub. Back then he had not a care in the world and he would play with his brothers and sisters for hours and hours.
He decided this was hopeless and climbed into another bar. He wasn’t in Woodland anymore. This place was full of bizarre hairless creatures called humans. He tried to run off as fast as he could, but someone saw him.
“Hey you!”
Commando bear just sat still. Didn’t know what was about to happen and he was scarred. Just then a godly looking figure snatched him up and spoke. “You don’t know why your here, do you? Well, I know exactly what you want to do, and I want to help you.” Commando bear just starred. “You want to kill the demon Herne, don’t you. You know, the demon who killed your parents?”
“I guess.” The whole bar roared with laughter. “I know you want to, I was sent down to give you a few powers, like the talking you just recently discovered, and the claws of death from you father.” “Hmm okay, so I can talk? What’s with the claws of death? What do they do?” “They can cut through any substance, quiet useful in any battle. Oh, also, you get to consult with me any time you need me. Thats what I’m here for.
Just like that, the strange character was gone. Then, an even worse thing happened. Herne was right there. Oh no. Herne spoke. “I heard of your plan,-” Commando bear thought fast. The claws of death. BAM!!!! Herne’s head was on the ground.
So, in the end Commando bear found his rightful place as a god with his family, and stayed in his room watching soap operas all day, hoping to learn some new moves from the lead character. After all, if he didn’t watch that soap on that faithful day, he would never would have seen the distraction move that Pandima pulled.
